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The Ardathian - Prologue by ~xx-amaramis-xx:iconxx-amaramis-xx:



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A new race for life and love would soon begin, the clashing of titans, and new power such as the likes of Shadow the Hedgehog and his allies have never seen.  

Reality will be stretched, lives will be lost, decisions will be made, and hearts will be joined.  

As night fell, Shadow the Hedgehog stretched his legs and lay down on his G.U.N bed, closing his eyes to yet again relive his age-old memories of the incident on the ARK, now fifty-two years ago.   

Sonic, out of breath form his last run, lounged happily against the alley wall.

Amy Rose shut her diary and sighed happily.  Moving on from Sonic had been like being released from a trap; they were both free and firm friends.

Knuckles leant against his Master Emerald, stroking it and assuring it that he will never let any harm come to it.  But its pulse was louder and more irregular now.  He, too, sensed something was coming.  Something monumental was coming faster than Sonic could ever dream of running.  The fate of the world would hang in the balance.

The Chaotix counted their notes as their client handed them their pay.  They would now be able to update their office and pay the rent.  The case had been successful, and now they intended to enjoy a well-deserved break.

Rouge the Bat placed her newest jewel in a small glass case, grinning at its pink brilliance.  Maybe she would have it made into a pendant, to match her pink hearts and lipstick on her outfit.

Cream, Cheese and Big snuffled gaily as they frolicked in their happy dreams, cocooned in the duvets of their beds.

Tails panted, ready to get to bed very late; for a 13-year-old.  The X Tornado was finished, polished, updated and fixed from its last battering with Eggman.

The good old Doctor mopped his brow and fell fast asleep on his desk.  It had been a long day and he needed his rest.

In the darkness, something else was gloriously, perfectly awake.  Ears swivelling to detect sound and tail swishing impatiently from side to side, cautiously sniffing the air for the scent of excitement, a pair of glowing, beautiful glacially icy blue eyes blinked once.  

The mouth curved into an elegant smile.
©2008-2009 ~xx-amaramis-xx
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Author's Comments

Hey guys, I've managed it!!!

I've worked out how to make the upload of text work...so anyway...

This will have many chapter in it, 'The Ardathian,' is like a novel.

Congrats to anyone who actually reads it!

More coming soon; I don't want to upload it all at once.

Stay tuned and give comments.

Next - [link]

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:iconindigomoonlight:
The way it jumps from character to character is a bit like one of those introductions to a movie when introducing them.

So you explained to me who the main characters are going to be, but I have a mystery the keep me on to the first chapter.

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The faeries didn't just conjure it up!

Dyscalculia it's real... [link]
:iconxx-amaramis-xx:
*singsdancescelebrates*
Yayayayayayay!
Thankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!
Will keep it up as much as possible!

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Imagination is freedom!
OMG, I came up with that by myself!! :D
Oh yeah, flaming is for the kitchen, not the internet
Check out my Sonic Fancharacter fic here - [link]
:icongoldenblackrose:
Hmm =w= Interesting..I actually shivered when i read "The mouth curved into an elegant smile.":XD:Will read on~:heart:! >3<
:iconxx-amaramis-xx:
Thanks so much! I really appreciate you reading!

I'm hooked to your Knighted Lovers; I will read as soon as its posted!

I wanted the Prologue to be a bit like in a film where they flick from character to character...

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Imagination is freedom!
OMG, I came up with that by myself!! :D
Oh yeah, flaming is for the kitchen, not the internet
Check out my Sonic Fancharacter fic here - [link]
:iconflyingmonkeyofoz:
OMG, it's good!


Seriously though, fantastic way to begin. Nice variety on the words, and great use of punctuation to create the appropriate effect.
Best line: The mouth curved into an elegant smile.
Shivers down my spine!

I like this novel/film/comic like effect where points of view switch quickly. Good way to engage the reader. This is interesting, you've succeeded in hooking me into reading more!

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By the prickling of my thumbs,
something wicked this way comes...
:iconxx-amaramis-xx:
I'm glad to hear it, and cheers for reading.

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Imagination is freedom!
OMG, I came up with that by myself!! :D
Oh yeah, flaming is for the kitchen, not the internet
Check out my Sonic Fancharacter fic here - [link]
:iconsirfailalot:
only made it to ten so far... lol I'm giving you major points for uniqueness she's an awesome character 8) .. now if only I could come up with a unique one.
:iconxx-amaramis-xx:
Wow, another Amaramis fan! Seems I made the right decision in making a foul-mouthed, temperamental, instinctive and odd chaarcter! :glomp: Thanks-you very much, and I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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Imagination is freedom!
OMG, I came up with that by myself!! :D
Oh yeah, flaming is for the kitchen, not the internet
Check out my Sonic Fancharacter fic here - [link]

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